Please feel free to comment one my A3 pitch. i know it needs more colour and a few other thing. it would be good to get some feedback from you all.
thanks Jake
Hi Jake, It looks like a comic strip which I think is really cool.The only things I can say is that the borders that separate each window in the strip could be thicker.Maybe a background color like light yellow or something.These are things you're probably going to do already, when you jazz it up for the final.Not much else I can say about it.Cool pitch!
Hi Jake, It looks like a comic strip which I think is really cool.The only things I can say is that the borders that separate each window in the strip could be thicker.Maybe a background color like light yellow or something.These are things you're probably going to do already, when you jazz it up for the final.Not much else I can say about it.Cool pitch!
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