Sunday, May 22, 2011
Multi Jakes
the task was to take 4 or 5 different photos of your self, in different positions, Without moving the camera. using Photoshop we then had to cut each figure out and merge into one.
Assessment Aimed at Getting Children to tell their parents about ways to help the planet . starting at home
I choose installing a water tank.
Remember when reading this that it is aimed and children.
Remember when reading this that it is aimed and children.
GO GREEN
GET A TANK…!
Water is essential to life on Earth, but people tend to treat it like there is an endless supply. It's time to talk about the value of water and how you can protect your future.
It’s up to us to start thinking … “it’s good to be saving water”
Every drop counts…
To start being smarter about the way we use water in your home, tell your parents about water tanks.
What is a tank?
It’s like a drink bottle, it holds water. It connects to your gutter with a pipe and when it rains all the water from your roof goes into the bottle/Tank.
There are many different types of tanks. Big round one’s as big as a swimming pool or you can get a slim line one that fits nicely down the side of the house.
Why should you get a tank?
By getting a tank you are not only saving water but your parents would save money when their water bill comes in. It saves it from just going down the drain and into the ocean. There’s enough water in there already isn’t there!
What can you use it for?
You can use the water to drink/have a bath or shower and even brush your teeth...
Did you know? That rain water is better for you then the water you get from your taps if you don’t have a tank already.
You can also just use it to water the garden, as plants love rain water. Just connect a hose to your tank and there you go… All the water you need is there to make your flowers grow.
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Sunday, May 8, 2011
Weight loss Ad
Trying to lose weight with not much success?
Tried all the fad diet ways to lose weight?
PERSONAL TRAINING IS THE WAY TO GO
How will Personal Training benefit you?
Working with a Personal Trainer will benefit you by offering you:
• Variety – You will do many fun different things including swimming and Yoga and polarities
• Motivation - Progress means results, and results mean motivation to strive for that next level of fitness!
• Progression – as you progress through your plan your trainer will change the plan as you go to increase your outcome!
• someone else there to motivate and help you.• Structure – your trainer will also be in personal contact with you, even when you are not in a session to see how you are going
• Results - Personal Trainers are educated to ensure you get results, so they can make the most of your time in the club • Progression – as you progress through your plan your trainer will change the plan as you go to increase your outcome!
Jakes Story.
In 2001, I got motivated to change my lifestyle, begin eating better and stay committed to exercise. The most dramatic changes, however, came in the first week, losing 7kgs. I needed nothing else to motivate me that was it. I was hooked. Twelve months later I has amazing lost 30kgs. I must say I did it the hard way EXCERSIZE and eating right is the only way to successfully lose weight and keep it off for life.
Eating right didn’t mean starving myself either, I actually ate more than I did when I was overweight. I ate more healthy foods and more of it.
In the beginning personal training at the gym was tough, but the feeling you get after you work out is intense.
Sunday, May 1, 2011
THE NEW "ARMY'' RECRUIT PAGE
The original ad http://www.alistapart.com/articles/whoneedsheadlines/
Thinking of a career that will excite and motivate you to do your best?
Then look no further we have the career for you the army. You will be trained by the best to become the best. The Army can take you places you’d never dreamed possible and experience things you’ll never forget.
A career in The Australian Army is not only about serving your country but helping people all over the world including rebuilding in third world countries.
The rewards of joining the army are over welling, such as pride and satisfaction, that at the end of the day you’ve help out people less fortunate that yourself.
A Soldier in the Australian. Army is the embodiment of physical strength, emotional strength and strength of purpose. As a Soldier, you will be prepared to serve our country whenever and wherever you are needed, combat-ready at all times, trained to counter any threat, anywhere.
To join our exclusive team than simply click the
apply button
Critque of an army artical
- Does the copy get to the point quickly? no it rambles on more about why not to join the army, to me.
- Is the copy shy about the offer or incentive? there is not enough promotional information in the offer.
- Is it easy to respond to? No way they need a clear like saying "APPLY NOW" in link form.
- Does the copy overcome every objection to replying, leaving the reader with no choice but to act? No way id rather go work at McDonald's.
- Does the copy use simple words? yes to simple
- Does the copy use active language (does it address the site visitor as ‘you’)? yes because they are talking directly to the person
- Is the copy broken down into simple sections and bullet points? no its all over the place and, to me its a very bad peace or writing.
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